Because in the end
We all are little broken
Leaving a bit of us
Everywhere we go
Empty souls or empty spaces
The void is always created
Waiting to be replenished
Till a new end
For a new beginning
Can you feel the halo
Can you see the light
Wandering in the darkness
Embracing the night
They don't need to see me cry
They don't need to understand
Never opened this way
Walls I built falling down
Without making any sound
Eluding all doubts
Curtains drew apart
Burning like sun
New power emanates
Slowly climbing the peaks
Discovering the new me
making my own ways
Deep into my rhymes
Tints of life you feel
And my poems come alive.
©Era Singh
I wrote this poem while having some discussion with Rishika and she said the first two lines Because in the end, we all are little broken and this poem got completed, which is incomplete in the draft for so long. Thanks a lot, The Mystic Inkslinger ☺☺
Thank you for reading it and do let me know in comments, how it is?
Love the poem
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Thank you so much, Tina 😊😊
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Era, it’s 1K Followers now….😍😍
Congratulations Ma’am….
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Thanks a lot, Divyang ☺☺
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Beautiful poetry! And congratulations on 1000 followers!
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Thank you so much, Ishaan 😊😊
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welcome!
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Splendid❣
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Thank you so much, Sir 😊😊
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Sir-Sir bol k aap mujhe budhaa bana diye ho😟😟
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Hehe, nothing like that, muje laga aap bade ho 😊
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Extraordinary dear Era. Amazing work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Mam 💙
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Light wandering in the darkness..
Tints of life you feel and my poems come alive!!
Damn awesome it is Era!💜💫
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Thank you so much, Chetna 💛
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Wonderful poem, very relatable!! Well done!!
Love when walls fall and people can be more of themselves!!
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Thanks a lot, Omatra 💛
So glad to know this
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You replied to this comment.
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Thanks a lot, Luisa 😊😊
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🤗
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This poem is gorgeous, it touched my heart and soul. And it is so so beautiful!!!!♥️♥️
“Empty souls or empty spaces
The void is always created”
So tragically true….❣
“Wandering in the darkness
Embracing the night”
“Tints of life you feel
And my poems come alive.”
These lines stole my heart💞💞
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Many many Thanks, Ishita 💙💙
I have a big smile after reading your comment ☺☺☺
So happy to know this
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♥️♥️😍
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Wow!! Beautiful Era… As always… We do leave a piece of us everywhere we go… Some live off those pieces so our brokenness is life to others! 🌺
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Thanks a lot, Zamadlomo 💙, for your appreciation and support always 😃😃
How are you now?
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Doing so much better, thank you so much 😊
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That’s nice to know
Take care , Stay Safe 😊😊
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Will definitely do… Thank you so much 😊 🌺
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Beautiful.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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I enjoyed this poem !
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Thank you so much, Sir 🙂🙂
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You are welcome Era. Please just call me James
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Amazing poem dear……felt connected 😊😊😊
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Thanks a lot 🙂🙂🙂
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♥️🌈♥️
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Wow such profound words of thought. Just read your bio. Happy to see a fellow Doctor in the world of blogging ✌🌸
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Thanks a lot 😊😊
Wow, that is great to know, you being a doctor too 😃
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Your welcome. Well a Dr to be. A final year dental student. Have a great day
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oh, okay, Nice 😊😊
you too have a great day ahead!!!
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Amazing poem, Era! Everyone’s broken in one way or the other. Only time knows when they get filled.
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Thanks a lot, Anisha 🙂🙂
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My pleasure! ☺
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Absolutely great 👍
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Thank you 🙂🙂
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This is indeed beautiful ❤
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Thanks a lot ☺☺
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Thanks a lot 😃
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Excellent. Also love the illustration. Beautiful.
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Thanks a lot, Sir for your appreciation ☺☺
I am so happy to know this
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True that …
coz in the end, we all are a little broken.
But we manage to live with those broken pieces !! And that too without anyone noticing 👍🏻
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Yup, so rightly said by you
Thanks a lot, Nima 😃😊
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Welcome Era 🙂
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