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The Quest- 3

Part-3 ( Final part)

If you have not yet read the Part-1 and Part-2 of The Quest, read them first to understand the storyline better and to connect all the dots. Links for both the previous parts given below-

The Questโ€ฆ..

The Quest- 2

Continued from part-2

“Jo, Jo, open your eyes, I am with you dear,” said Nicole. I failed, I failed once again, how much I tried to convince you and tried that you forget the past and move on, to come out of the guilt, you had done everything you could, but sometimes, opposite happens from what we think. He had admitted her to the hospital when he found her faint in the study. He was out of town due to some urgent work when he got a call from their neighbor about Jo behaving strangely and talking by herself. He instantly rushed back home.

Nicole never thought, his and his wife’s life would change so drastically. I should not have left you alone. He was reminiscing about the past happenings when the nurse asked him to come as the doctor wanted to discuss something important.

Jo was screaming, Joey, Joey where are you, my child, I would not let anything happen to you, how would I live without you. Joey was lying on the floor, not responding, and had several injuries mark, and suffocating, Jo rushed to her and immediately tried to take her outside, and call help but it was too late now as she had stopped breathing due to lack of oxygen and severe wound. Again a blast occurred as the fire was now had spread in the whole home, the house was burning and She was sitting in front of the house with her daughter in her lap. Her grandma standing amidst the fire, crying and saying I warned you many times to return back but you never did, now its too late. Don’t worry, they are in a better place now. You tried your best my child, leave your guilt, and free yourself, it was never your fault.

Dr, Is there any chances, that Jo will be fine again asked Nicole, I tried my best to tell her truth, that her mother had died and she was a very good daughter who always took care of her, but she never believed this fact, and thought, she was not good daughter, had not taken care of her and left her at the care home. In reality, she never left her mom in any care home, she started believing so after her death.

Nicole, your wife’s condition is not good, and it got worst after that car accident, which occurred on the highway and unfortunately, your daughter, also died in that. But for Jo, her mother and daughter both are still alive, she has developed multiple personalities within herself as she is unable to believe the truth. She was already suffering from depression and loneliness since her childhood and now her condition is getting worse. Firstly, the separation from her father and then grandma had an impact on her personality and when her mother becomes ill and when she was not able to give proper time to her daughter due to work, even though she was giving, she thought, it was not enough and she started blaming herself for this. We are giving the best treatment and counseling, hoping she will be good soon.

Both of them were talking, when the nurse comes running, Dr, Dr, Jo, Jo, please come fast. Both of them rush to Jo’s room where they saw her crying endlessly. On seeing, Nicole, she said, my mom and my daughter, I lost them, I lost them. I tried my best but I was not able to save them. I am sorry, Nicole. It was not your mistake Jo, it was not your mistake said, Nicole, maybe this is destiny.

On the side table, her mom’s diary and the key were there with an opened chest having the photos of her mother’s funeral and death certificate. Nicole thought I did not know how this happened, but I am happy, Jo finally accepted the truth. Jo told Dr and Nicole everything and slowly went to sleep as he had given her sedative.

Nicole said, Dr. I don’t think, Jo is better even now, her grandmother’s home had been burnt when she was a child, and her grandmother died in that fire. Her mother would somehow able to save her only, and her sister too succumbed to her injuries. She always heard her mother, feeling guilty for it and not be able to save them and due to this too, Jo had been always overprotective, with every time something happens she used not to feel responsible for it. We just recently renovated this house to fulfill her mother’s wish after so many years.

Dr said, No Nicole, now she is fine and I assure you, would be better, her mind always wanted her to accept the truth when she refused, created multiple personalities but still, there were always hints to her, what is the truth but are ignored and when she finally opened that room in her mind where she kept all her bad memories, to escape for them, she finally realized the truth and accepted it. She will recover soon.

After a year, the prayer meeting was held for Joey and Jo’s mother at her grandma’s home. Jo, Nicole, and Helly, their adopted daughter were seen together. Jo said I hope they are a better place now, I am sorry maa, grandma and Joey. I am sorry. She hugged Helly.

The End

I hope I have not let down your expectations about the ending and you liked it. Do let me know your feedback, I always look forward to it, how my first attempt at writing something like this was? I am really thankful to all of you.

And also I would love to know your interpretation of the story and metaphors I used.

If you have any question or doubt regarding the story, the comment section is all yours, I will surely answer them.

Thanks for reading!!!!


I am Doctor by profession who loves to write poetry and articles , a mental health enthusiastic , nature lover and very much interested in history and mythology .

70 thoughts on “The Quest- 3

  1. I read part 1, 2 and 3 in a stretch,. And you have done a wonderful job dear Era !!
    Because you are a doctor and because your area of interest is mental health, I could sense something related was coming up. But it did not dim the charm of your writing. You have done a great job dear doctor โค

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  2. Amazing!!! Loved it…
    The mind is an amazing thing… traumatic events like losses can have effects on the mind.
    I watch that with my own mom and Alzheimerโ€™s.
    When something traumatic happens she slips more… when my dad died – that one was big!! We had no idea. That tipped her over the edge to where it wasnโ€™t safe for her to be alone – we had to take over. She was forgetting everything and his death rocked her!!
    I wasnโ€™t allowed to tell her about my breast cancer until it was over and I was ok. We were afraid it would make her slip more.
    Recently she needed more care, and we had to move her to the next section.. she was forgetting how to get dressed and simple things…
    Her nursing home is on lock down so we canโ€™t be there to comfort her – make it not so bad – distract her
    She knows what the other section is… she knows if she gets moved there itโ€™s because sheโ€™s getting worse.
    They just moved her the other day… and she was sooooo upset!!
    My mom is like me, or she was… we are pretty adaptable and we go along with whatever …
    But not this time for her ๐Ÿ˜”… she was so upset and making the home call us – asking who authorized that???
    Sheโ€™s ok now and she likes her new room.. but is hard and then we canโ€™t be with her. Sheโ€™s slipping away
    So my point is… the mind is an incredible thing… the way things effect it and the way you can take things, but then there is a fine line before it snaps. Trauma has a crazy effect!
    Iโ€™m so curious always with how the mind works …
    Her mother actually also had Alzheimerโ€™s … so I remember once we went to visit her mom… and her mom didnโ€™t know who I was … but she knew my mom… however she believed my mom was 8 years old ๐Ÿ˜ฎ kept telling my mom things she used to say to her when she was a child… I remember that. She was not in reality. Her memory was in years past.
    So the mind is incredible with how it reacts to things. So complex!!
    Loved your story – very nice writing โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Thank you so much, Omatra ๐Ÿ’›
      You are very brave and courageous, the inspiration for all ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚
      Yes, Mind is the most powerful thing, humans have, we still are not able to decode it completely
      I have just read about the disease in my psychiatry books but you have experienced it, I have seen a few cases but they were at starting of their dementia, and I am always amazed by this subject
      Thank you once again and to share your experience with us
      Take care stay safe ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Just because of this I keep on missing your part 1 and 2 subsequentlyโ€ฆ I canโ€™t sleep up with suspense which you create with this story line, really amazing Eraโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    Really you played with words as well as our mindโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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  4. Wow Era! I loved the ending! It ended on a such a good note, Iโ€™m so happy about that!! You didnโ€™t let us down AT ALL!!โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ Keep writing such stories!!

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  5. You must have put a lot effort in this, I feel. But that’s worth it, Era. You connected the pieces so well to give it a touch o reality.

    You can write the dialogue in inverted commas, yk to make it sound like a conversation and support it with the expressions of the characters.
    Just a suggestion.๐Ÿ˜…

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    1. Thanks a lot, Chetna
      Glad to know this ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

      Yup, nice way, thanks for the suggestion, I will definitely gonna keep that in mind whenever I will write next ๐Ÿ˜„

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  6. Honestly I am not interested in reading a big or story with continuation. Also not interested in thrillers but I feel good of reading this. I liked the way the story told the mental struggle of a person and how her childhood affected her and its end made it worth reading.

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  7. I read all the three episodes at a stretch. They’re very well connected, Era. Luckily, it wasn’t a haunted house as I had expected it to be. I liked how you emphasized treatment for mental health issues and ended the story with empathy and light-heartedness. โฃ

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  8. a bittersweet treat of psycological thrill. You rocked the last part really! I like how you went in depth to explain the reasons behind her behavior and mental illness and on top of that you managed a happy ending, ha! Brilliant.

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    1. Hehe, thanks a lot, Joana ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
      Glad to know you liked it

      Is it really, thanks a lot, Shuttle Island is one of the best psychological thriller ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Hello Era, Read the whole story…You were able to keep the mystery lingering and making the reader want to read on…I believe it’s a work brilliantly done๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
    Keep writing๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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